We’re both chatting with the boys. Maddy and Harry really hit it off and Liam and I did as well.
“Lets order ice cream!” Niall suggests. Of course he does, he loves food.
Zayn calls over the waiter and we all put in our orders.
“Brie, would you like to split something with me?” Liam questioned.
“Yeah,” I smiled.
We kept talking and our ice cream came.
We all devoured our flavors. Of course, Liam was using a fork.
Its now two in the afternoon and we’re all finished.
Louis picks up his head from his phone and asks everyone if we could all walk around the mall together.
“We’re more than happy to!” Maddy nodded her head and agreed with me.
We got up from our seats and exited Applebees. We walked toward Macys. We tried on silly hats and had a great time. We walked into almost every store and had a blast. Four hours later and its six.
“Hey boys, we don’t have anything planned for the next day or two. How about we go to the club tonight? Would you ladies like to join us?” Zayn flashed us to cutest smile.
Maddy and I look at each other and are more than glad to go with them.
All the boys chime in, “Sounds good.”
Harry looks at Maddy and I, “We better get going then. Would you like us to pick you up? How does 9 sound?”
“Its good! See you then.” I exchange numbers with Liam and give him my address.
We walked away, “Maddy, I can not believe all of that just happened.”
“Its great. Can we go back to your house and get ready? “
“Yeah, can we go to Pac Sun first? I saw a cute dress in there earlier and I think it would be good for tonight. Liam is great, Id love to get to know him better. You and Harry were talking a lot, you like him so far?” I winked. I knew he was her favorite.
“Harry is amazing. I know him better then he thinks!” We both shared a laugh.
We strolled into Pac Sun, I saw the dress and grabbed it. Last one and my size. Perfect. It was a long sleeve, skin tight, plain blank dress. It fit my figure well. Maddy grabbed a few things herself, a pair of shorts, sunglasses, and a floral strapless dress for tonight. We checked out and then we were on our way back to my house. We drove the thirty-five minute drive, and arrived at my house around seven.
I walked in my house and my mother was standing at the door way. Uh oh. I could tell this wasn’t going to be good.
“Hey Ma, whats up?”
“You’ve been out all day Brie where the hell have you been?”
“I went to the mall with Maddy. I met the cutest british boy there.”
“Well I hope you don’t have plans tonight. Your fathers parents are coming over.”
I ignored her comment and went into my room. I let Maddy shower first, and I laid in bed looking at pictures of my parents. My mom has been spending a lot of time with my Dads parents since he died. Its okay, I know its hard for her. But I have to see Liam tonight. By 9, my mother and grandparents will be in the family room, probably with wine. When Maddy got out of the shower I went in. Maddy did her hair, and I repeated when I was done bathing. Its 8:30 and my mother hasn’t come to check in on me yet. I know my grandparents probably just got here and Mom won’t come get me unless they ask.
“Nearly ready, Maddy?”
“I’m done.”
“Alright good, me too. Its 8:55. Remember, tell your parents that you are sleeping at my house and I’m sleeping at yours. Got it? The boys will be here any minute. We gotta climb out my window.”
“Whatever you say Brie!”
We both climbed out my window. Before I left, I turned on my tv and made it look like I was sleeping in my bed. I’ll be safe for a while, hopefully. I saw the boys car pull up and we got in.
“Hey,” Liam looked right at me.
“Hi Maddy.” Harry looked in Maddys direction.
“Hello” She gave him a cute smirk.
The rest of the boys said hello. Louis was driving. He got us there pretty quick. This club was the best in town. It was upperclass, and expensive. It was $30.00 entry. We walked up to the guard and skipped the whole line. Girls were screaming. Well, I found all the fans. The boys showed the guard a card and they didn’t have to pay, but he stopped Maddy and I.
“Hey they’re with us. I’ll pay for them.” Niall was adorable, he quickly opened his wallet and pulled out $60.00 and handed it over to the guard.
“You’re sweet, thank you!” I looked at Niall and I noticed his deep blue eyes, gorgeous.
We walked into the club. It was crowded. We followed the boys and they led us to a room in the very back of the club. The room was dark and it was basically a mini club with less people. Im guessing it was a special room that must have costed a few thousand, at least.
I caught up with Liam and I asked him what was going on.
“We paid for this room, especially for you ladies. We didn’t want you to get trampled by the massive amount of fans. We didn’t want to be interrupted.” Liam shot me a smile and I gave him one back.
Once again, we all squeezed into a small booth. We didn’t order any food, just a few drinks here and there. I was never really into drinking.
I was in a deep conversation with Liam about how he feels that he has girls following him. I look to my right where Maddy was sitting and she’s not there. I look around the room, and I found her with Harry in a very tiny booth, made for two people and no more. I hope she’s having a good time with him, he seems like a nice boy.
“So I see Maddy likes Harry?” Louis asked.
“Yeah, she always has.”
“Hey, are you a fan of One Direction?” Niall has such a cute Irish accent.
“Yes I am, I went to your concert last night. Third row.”
Zayns eyes got big, “Oh, I think I do remember seeing two beautiful girls in that row!”
I giggled, thats cute. These boys are charming!
“So, who’s your favorite boy Brie?”
“Well, its you, Liam!!”
Zayn, Niall, and Louis, all in sync, said “Awhhhh!”
We carried on in normal conversation for about an hour. Every so often, out of the corner of my eye I could see Harry and Maddy sneak a kiss. They have exchanged numbers and were texting the whole time at my house. They like each other..
Its 10:30 and I still haven’t received a call or text from my mom. Its working out well.
“Brie, would you like to dance?” I nodded. Liam took my hand and guided me back to the crowded club.
We danced for at least two hours. We’re really having a good time, Liam is a great guy and wonderful to be around.
He bends over and whispers in my ear, “Would you like to go back?”
I nodded. Liam stopped in his tracks. “Brie. So far, I’m really into you. Can we hang out tomorrow?”
“I’d love to!” I can’t believe this is happening. This is incredible.
Liam and I got our own booth and started to get to know each other. We told each other about our lives and played 21 questions. Before I knew it, it was already 3 in the morning. When I checked my phone, I had 4 missed calls from my mom. Its okay, she’ll be fine.
Harry and Maddy are lost. I think they’re dancing. Good for them. I got really hungry.
“Can we order food?”
“Of course. Order what you’d like. Its on me.”
“How sweet of you,” I called the waiter over and ordered some chicken fingers and french fries.
“That sounds good, make that two, please.” Liam looked at me and winked.
Our food came and once again we started to talk.
The club almost emptied. Its nearly 5.
“I should get you home, your mother is probably worried sick.”
“Okay but we have to find Maddy.”
We both walked out to the main room and there was only about a hundred people or so left. I saw and Maddy and I was about to walk over to her but Liam stopped in front of me. He brushed the hair out of my face and gently put his lips to mine. It was more then a peck, but I didn’t make out with him. It was just the perfect dose of him. This boy is perfection. Its been one day and I like him. I can honestly say I hope this goes somewhere. He pulled away and we both smiled at each other. I continued walking towards Maddy.
“C’mon Mad lets go. Its almost 5 we have to get home and get some sleep.” I think Maddy was a little tipsy. Harry took good care of her though, I could tell.
We all piled into the car. Im not sure what Zayn, Louis and Niall did the whole night, but they seemed pretty tired. We all were. Louis drove again. We were home in 10 minutes.
“Bye Liam.”
“Bye Brie, I had a great time with you.” I smiled. Damn. He’s cute.
Maddy and Harry exchanged goodbyes. And then we both did with the rest of the boys.
I walked into my house, Maddy and I both fell onto my bed. Maddy crashed out, but I stayed awake for a few extra minutes. I was looking at the ceiling when I heard vibration. Liam texted me.
‘I hope you had a good time, can’t wait to hang out tomorrow, xo’
I didn’t text him back, I laid my head down on my pillow and quickly dozed off.
0 notesLet me just start off by saying this is my first time writing fan faction. don’t be to harsh. i’d like commentary. wish me luck. this says I’m not a big fan but i really am. i don’t know if this is good haha but i really tried! i hope you guys like it:*
Chapter One.
I woke up early on a Saturday. Why. I did my usual routine. Checked Twitter, Facebook, Tumblr. I was confused on why I woke up so early when I had gotten home so late from the One Direction concert. Im not a huge fan but I do admire them. I decided to call the friend I had gone with, Maddy and see what she was up to.
It rang a few times before she picked up.
“Hey Maddy!”
“Hi Brie, I have a huge plan for us today.”
Maddys plans were always outrageous, I was nervous to hear what she had planned.
“Oh jeez, alright go ahead.”
“Today, we are going to the mall. One Direction is supposed to be there!”
She was a die hard fan, I knew she would want to do this.
“Okay, what time are we going?”
“10. You have an hour, Im picking you up!”
I hung up the phone, hopped in the shower and continued getting ready, a daily routine. No one else was up in my house so I didn’t tell anyone what I was up to. Im sure it was okay that I went, I’m 18. I can be on my own for a day.
10 o’clock came around and of course Maddy was here on the dot. I walked down the drive way and got in the car. ‘Moments’ was blasting. This girl just can’t get enough of this band.
“Hey girl are you ready!”
“Ready as I’ll ever be to stalk a band in a mall.” I giggled and Maddy drove away.
We walked in the mall, surprisingly it wasn’t crowded at all. I knew something was wrong. A band like One Direction is in a small New Jersey mall, and no one is here. We walked around for about three hours looking for these boys. No where in sight.
“Maddy, can we grab a bite somewhere? Im starving!”
“Yeah. I guess.” I could hear the disappointment in Maddys voice.
We walked into the nearest restaurant, Applebees. We both ordered and enjoyed our food. As we get up to leave, I bumped into a tall, thin, boy with dark brown hair.
“Oh I’m sorry!” Immediately I knew who it was. Im not the biggest One Direction fan but I had some knowledge. Its Liam Payne. I said nothing, I just looked at him with a blank expression.
Maddy stepped in, “Its okay. Im Maddy and she’s Brie. You must be Liam!”
“Yes, thats right. Hey, Im sorry I bumped into you. How would you girls like it if you sat down with me and the boys for a coke?” Liam did that cute little half smile that boys do.
“We’d love it.” Maddy and I both said in awe.
We followed him to his table and he introduced us to his friends.
“This is Harry, Niall, Zayn, and Louis.”
“Hey!” The boys screamed
“Hi!” Maddy and I both were smiling like crazy. Even though I wasn’t a big fan like Maddy, these boys were even more appealing closer up.
All seven of us squeezed in to a little booth, and we all started to chat…
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I love you, Liam! You’re absolutely wonderful<3 Never change :) .xx
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